tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post3264974045526873102..comments2023-12-27T09:10:12.642-05:00Comments on SOCIAL ZYMURGY: THE CULTURE OF BEER: Kitty's Cloakroom Caper, FFF #30Jenny Jenny Flanneryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07621715431584059448noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-1876741279370945112010-05-10T10:56:48.266-04:002010-05-10T10:56:48.266-04:00Doc - A great tale as usual from you. A bit of &#...Doc - A great tale as usual from you. A bit of 'sauciness' and a great ending. And as Pipe said, really great dialogue.<br /><br />Well done my friend,<br /><br />David.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-91400238735999623132010-05-06T09:20:20.345-04:002010-05-06T09:20:20.345-04:00Err- These days, I settle for the pink.
Flannery-...Err- These days, I settle for the pink.<br /><br />Flannery- Thank you dear.<br /><br />Randal- I am more than willing to own up to being a heathen.<br /><br />CJT- I didn't know if I could write in the voice of two middle aged women as this is about as far removed from my character as I can imagine but it was fun to try!<br /><br />Pipe Tobacco- My dialog just seems to write itself with little or no effort on my part. The exposition and getting the characters to get up and move around is what I struggle with. You will note in the story there isn't any description of what they look like, very little setting, and they don't actually do anything but sit and drink.<br /><br />Skyler's Dad- Was it racy enough for ya?<br /><br />Paul Brazill- Saucy was what I was shooting for. Thanks.<br /><br />Sue H- Glad you liked it dear.<br /><br />Joyce- The ladies were fun to write and I'm glad you enjoyed it.<br /><br />DocDochttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16979621370660001312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-14616676462689832342010-05-05T16:43:57.179-04:002010-05-05T16:43:57.179-04:00This was great. I guess, what goes around...
The...This was great. I guess, what goes around...<br /><br />These two ladies are a trip and a half. Terrific characters and the story was such wicked fun.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-18151959178459570772010-05-05T13:20:31.172-04:002010-05-05T13:20:31.172-04:00Ha ha! Very, very good! The images that created......Ha ha! Very, very good! The images that created.......!SueHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11394307650434614637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-61895006199714062152010-05-05T11:36:45.810-04:002010-05-05T11:36:45.810-04:00Saucy! Very well told.Saucy! Very well told.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-56719247463320272652010-05-04T18:44:43.609-04:002010-05-04T18:44:43.609-04:00Great characters and a wonderful twist at the end!...Great characters and a wonderful twist at the end!SkylersDadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18264164502733912326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-78652686167253591312010-05-04T16:24:05.149-04:002010-05-04T16:24:05.149-04:00Wow! On this story, your dialogue is SO VERY good...Wow! On this story, your dialogue is SO VERY good! It reads so real and vivid. I am very impressed. I also like the setting in Mexico. <br /><br />PipeTobacco<br />http://frumpyprofessor.blogspot.comPipeTobaccohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17746884792061867611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-72927704547340096602010-05-04T15:07:07.939-04:002010-05-04T15:07:07.939-04:00Loved this! Women gossipping, who would have guess...Loved this! Women gossipping, who would have guessed? I'm surprised the Horse of a woman didn't squish the mexican, but hey the've been known to like robust women too at times. :)<br /><br />I'm with Randal, lots of swank in this one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-77415782293000411232010-05-04T14:04:09.861-04:002010-05-04T14:04:09.861-04:00You filthy heathen, this was full of swank. Great ...You filthy heathen, this was full of swank. Great stuff!Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-49227914724274596382010-05-04T10:46:27.899-04:002010-05-04T10:46:27.899-04:00Saucy! I really like this. Nice work!Saucy! I really like this. Nice work!Jenny Jenny Flanneryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07621715431584059448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25184989.post-1917749027570276762010-05-04T09:01:02.719-04:002010-05-04T09:01:02.719-04:00I wouldn't mind some pink and scotch for break...I wouldn't mind some pink and scotch for breakfast.ERRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16442208638023629048noreply@blogger.com